
Because ticking boxes won’t win bids — but demonstrating excellence will.
If you’ve ever stared at a “quality” question in a care tender and wondered what exactly are they looking for? — you’re not alone.
Quality sections often carry the most weight in public sector bids. While pricing might account for 30-40%, the quality questions usually carry 60-70% of the total score — and they’re how commissioners decide who is capable, compliant, and committed to delivering safe, effective care.
At Big Sister, we’ve supported over 500 care businesses to win contracts by breaking down quality questions and building answers that hit every point — clearly, confidently, and completely.
In this blog, we’ll walk you through a step-by-step approach to tackling these critical questions, using real-world insights from our experience in the sector.
Step 1: Understand What ‘Quality’ Means to Commissioners
Let’s clear up a misconception: Quality doesn’t just mean doing a good job — it means proving that you have the systems, people, processes, and results to deliver consistent, regulated, high-impact care.
Common themes include:
- Service delivery approach
- Safeguarding
- Workforce planning and training
- Governance and quality assurance
- Equality and inclusion
- Client outcomes and involvement
Even if you do all these things well, if you can’t clearly communicate how — you won’t get the marks.
Step 2: Decode the Question Like a Mark Scheme
When you see a quality question, break it down line-by-line. Highlight:
- Action words (e.g., demonstrate, explain, outline)
- Themes (e.g., safeguarding, staffing, outcomes)
- Outcomes required (e.g., how this improves service user experience)
Example:
“Please describe how you will deliver safe, person-centred care that meets the needs of diverse client groups, ensuring compliance with all relevant regulations.”
Breakdown:
- You must show how you deliver safe care
- Demonstrate person-centred approaches
- Address diversity and inclusion
- Reference regulations like CQC, MCA, and safeguarding
At Big Sister, we often annotate quality questions with colours and codes before writing begins.
Step 3: Structure Your Answer Logically
Use a clear structure — especially for longer answers. Our favourite? The PEER method:
P – Point: Make your key point
E – Explain: Add detail and reasoning
E – Evidence: Back it up with facts, examples, or data
R – Result: What’s the outcome for clients?
Example using PEER:
“We deliver person-centred care by co-producing care plans with each service user (Point). This involves holding an initial visit within 48 hours of referral, where our care coordinator listens to the client’s goals and preferences (Explain). In the past 12 months, 93% of clients rated their care plan as ‘completely personalised’ (Evidence). As a result, our care users are more engaged and retain our services longer (Result).”
Step 4: Use Human, Client-Focused Language
Commissioners don’t want to read a textbook. They want to know you care — and that you have a proven, compassionate way of delivering care.
Say:
- “Our support workers will…”
- “Families are kept updated via…”
- “We adapt our approach for clients with dementia by…”
Avoid:
- “Our organisation ensures the implementation of strategic frameworks in accordance with stipulated policy measures.”
(Please. Just no.)
Step 5: Prove It With Data and Results
Where possible, use:
- KPI results (e.g., visit punctuality rates, hospital readmission reduction)
- Satisfaction scores
- CQC feedback
- Client case studies
- Staff retention or training completion rates
Example:
“Over the past year, we’ve reduced missed visits by 22% through digital call monitoring and proactive rota reviews.”
Don’t have the data yet? Say how you’ll measure it and how often you’ll review.
Step 6: Bring in Your Team
Great bids don’t use vague terms like “our staff.” Instead, name roles and responsibilities.
“Our Deputy Manager oversees daily spot checks, while our Compliance Lead reviews incident reports weekly to identify trends.”
This shows you have a functioning structure — not just an intention.
Step 7: Reference Your Tools and Systems
Commissioners love to see how tech and process support quality.
Name the tools:
- Care Planner
- Access People Planner
- Radar Healthcare
- Nourish
- eLearning platforms
- MAR chart software
- Audit templates
But also explain the benefit of the tool — not just its name.
“We use Radar Healthcare for audit management, which alerts the Compliance Lead to any overdue actions and keeps our governance cycle on track.”
Step 8: Link to Outcomes and Improvements
Don’t just say what you do — show how it improves care.
Examples:
- “This approach supports independence and reduces unnecessary referrals to social care.”
- “By involving families in reviews, we’ve seen a 30% increase in satisfaction scores.”
- “This helps us detect risk early, reducing safeguarding incidents.”
Big Sister tip: Tie each point back to how it helps commissioners meet their duties under frameworks like the Care Act 2014, CQC standards, and NHS long-term plan goals.
Step 9: Walk in Their Shoes
Ask yourself:
- If I were a commissioner reading this, would I feel reassured?
- Would I know exactly how they’re going to deliver?
- Does this response feel confident, experienced, and capable — or vague and unproven?
That’s where we start every bid at Big Sister. Every word is written with the evaluator in mind.
Final Thought from Jill
“Too many care businesses lose points by assuming the evaluator understands what they meant. They don’t. Spell it out. Show your systems. Give your examples. Tell the human stories. That’s how you win.”
How Big Sister Can Help
We know how to:
- Break down scoring criteria
- Match your strengths to the questions
- Build high-scoring responses using our proven templates
- Write in your tone of voice — or help you develop one
Our bid writing and review services are affordable, flexible, and designed specifically for the care sector.
- Need help breaking down your next bid? Let’s do it together.
- Book a free strategy call
- Request a bid audit
- Download our Quality Question Planner